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poetry (gunnerz 30)

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  1. gunnerz30
    Member

    i wud like to share sum of my own poetry with the members of pkpolitics in this post... here goes
    the title of this 1 is hukmaran...
    "mein janta huan woo mujh per hastey hein
    magar iss jahan mein loug unn sein alag bhi bastey hein
    jiss shaer(city) mein woo noosh kartey hein mahngey jaam
    uss kein galiyoun mein insaan bhokey martey hein insaf kein hein woo bohat dawedar magar janey kiyun
    be gunah un kein daes mein agg mein galtey hein
    bolney waley ki kaaat deitay hein zuban
    haan khud baat magar inqalaab ki kartey hein
    doosroun ki doulat par rakhety hein woo gheri nazzar
    ankh apni magar gariban sein dour rakhrty hein
    tareekh keh kehtay hein woo apney app koun mahir
    sabaq magar uss kuan nahein parhtey hein
    woo iss koum kuan be-hiss samjhtey hein
    na chatey huwein bhi mera khayalat unn sein miltey hein
    iss koum mein loug apney halaaat badlna chatey hein magar
    zehnoun mein khouf hein jiseen sath lein kar chaltey hein
    waqt badlney ki ab taak umeed hein mujh kuan ather magar
    iss tarah ki koumoun kuan issen hi hukmaran sajtey hein" i will be waiting for any feedback... i know it has many faults and flaws.. but i had to make an attempt... thanx//

    Posted 11 months ago on 22 Jun 2011 11:47 #

  2. gunnerz30
    Member

    umm there is a correction... third line... it is
    "jiss shaer mein woo noosh kartey hein mahngey jaam ..

    Posted 11 months ago on 22 Jun 2011 11:48 #

  3. barackosama
    Member

    Long time no see!

    Sounds like you had got into Imran Khan's mind when you wrote that.

    Hope you were rallying support, any breakthroughs?

    Posted 11 months ago on 22 Jun 2011 12:00 #

  4. shafiq12
    member

    gunnerz

    What is context of your poem... I mean, what is idea behind your poem...

    Posted 11 months ago on 22 Jun 2011 12:01 #

  5. choosy
    Member

    @gunnerz30
    he he he
    wah wah wah kamal kar diya.
    mujhay akhari shair acha laga buhat.

    koshish jari rakheien.

    Posted 11 months ago on 22 Jun 2011 12:03 #

  6. gunnerz30
    Member

    @OBLIVion
    the idea is .. a description of the hypocrisies of the rulers.. and the fear of the ppl which is the root cuase of their ability to loot the ppl... @barak osama
    yea ive had sum break throughs will twk abt them later
    @choosy
    way to go bro... thanx glad u liked it..

    Posted 11 months ago on 22 Jun 2011 12:56 #

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